Wow! That was one long letter! But it was also made a whole lot of sense. He used good examples to explain his ideas and how they fit into the clergymen’s views. Their ideas were really the same just came out into the open in different ways. I like his writing because it is strong and spirited. He does not use big words or vocabulary that no one understands. He also uses a lot of religious notations; this helps us fit the situations of the time to the situations of the past. We can then see how they are repeating themselves. Martin Luther King, Jr. goes on to say that the churches are not really following their teachings. They seem to be more concerned with social issues. He asked the clergymen and us for that matter, to step up to the plate and show everyone that the time for racism and segregation to end is now. These ideas are still troubling our society today and we all need to read this passage and realize that we can’t change the past but we can’t build a better tomorrow unless we fix today.
Tuesday, April 1, 2008
Letter From Birmingham Jail
Thursday, March 13, 2008
Stratages For Revision
Wednesday, March 12, 2008
I Have a Dream
Tuesday, March 11, 2008
I have a dream
Strategies for Revision
I never really looked at revision in the way the book describes. I think I try to do my revisions as I go along more so than at the end. The guidelines for objective were very helpful. They helped me take a better look at my writing. Questioning ones self is hard to do but I can see how it can make you a better writer. I am very much a person who likes others to read my drafts. It gives me great insight and also can help me see critical mistakes. I always allow different people to read my papers, their response makes a huge impact on how I revise it.
I Have A Dream
Having read this before it was much easier to see things I may have missed the first time. The writing style is very good and easily understood. I think that is one of the best motivational speeches ever and that Martin Luther King, Jr. was an inspiration to all and still is a big influence today. He uses language that is easily understood and makes sense. We all want freedom and his words make us want it more. We all want to be treated the same, no matter if it is at work, on the street or even in a restaurant. I don’t think that this applies to just skin color either. I believe that the author tries to make us see that it can transformed into any situation. Disability, gender, color, wealth or any other separation we can make can be fit into I Have A Dream. The person in a wheelchair has a dream. The mother who wants to work outside the home, has a dream. The coal miner’s daughter has a dream. Different as their dreams may be, they have them and should be able to pursue them without interference.